This story is a response to the Challenge posted on Friday Fictioneers, which is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. A story inspired by the photo prompt, a beginning, middle and end in just 100 words or below, making every word count. Here goes my attempt, hope you guys like it.


Who looked at her with love

Who kissed her last

Who won her trust

Who broke her heart

Who was her friend, or lover

Who burned her down

Who was more clever???


Make a list…if you want. It doesn’t matter now. You don’t see her move with life like grace. You don’t see her lips rosy anymore. She doesn’t trust herself anymore. You wont sense a heart beat on her either. She is deserted now, lifeless, thoughtless, even despicable to you….she has become, what love made her. The love for you…you all.

The prompt image

Find the featured image here.


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