Next time!!!

This story is a response to the Challenge posted on Friday Fictioneers, which is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. A story inspired by the photo prompt, a beginning, middle and end in just 100 words or below, making every word count. Here goes my attempt, hope you guys like it.

Next time!!!

“Will you ever stay?” She murmured as he hugged her.

“Next time baby…. surely next time…” he says.

Picks up his bags and climbs the mast. He turns around to wave back to her as she hugs herself feeling the prick of guilt, still with the sigh of freedom, and estrangement.

“Next time!!!”

The prompt image

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