Stitches

This story is a response to the Challenge posted on Friday Fictioneers, which is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. A story inspired by the photo prompt, a beginning, middle and end in just 100 words or below, making every word count. Here goes my attempt, hope you guys like it. 

Stitches

What could bind better than her eyes, the way she looked always left me stunned.

Just yesterday she passed by, her eyes grazed my presence and my soul lit up.

The moment on fire and our bodies stitched.

Today she dint come out, cause I am invisible and her eyes see no more. Our fates, still stitched.

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The prompt image

Find the featured image here.

 

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16 comments on “Stitches

  1. Whew! I think I’ll go outside and cool off … and it’s in the 90’s here in Kansas! The stitched metaphor works well, Shaktiki and the melding of the personalities works, too. Oh, but please do check the spelling on the word “dint” — it is supposed to be spelled as “didn’t.” Other than that, that’s all you need to do. Minor stuff.

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