The Secret


This story is a response to the Challenge posted on Friday Fictioneers, which is a weekly blog link-up led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields at Addicted to Purple. A story inspired by the photo prompt, a beginning, middle and end in just 100 words or below, making every word count. Here goes my attempt, hope you guys like it.

The Secret

“We grew up watching it…hearing stories”

“You don’t go out because of it?”

“No…its Sam…on our 18th birthday…”

“Your twin brother?”

“Yes…he said we could go then…we were adults. I didn’t.”

“It’s okay…”

“….’You’re a sissy..’ that’s what he  said”.


“I don’t know…I’d told him not to…he just never listened…”


“It’s been 10 years now…I still see him there…..across the river…calling me out to play…its not him…I know…”


The Prompt Image


Find more about the creepy house and featured image here.


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